Hhmmm.
I was still; and remain a bit skeptical about this. The guitar at the start made me think, wow this could be some awesome power metal here but then the breakbeat drumming game in and proved me wrong.
What I do like about this is the combination of items you've used. It's very creative and original and although I may not like it, I appreciate the way you've used everything and used it well.
What I don't like is the way the guitar seams to be a little out of time at parts and sometimes (only on one occasion actually) the guitar goes out of key at about 3:30. Also; the stop-start of the drums was a bit confusing and didn't sound right. If there were just a few bits where it didn't stop and start.
Over all a good mix; just add a few more variation and chages in a few spots and it'll be on it's way to great!
P.S: Love the sample voice. x)
J3en